Writing Prompt Response

So, I’m doing it a little late in the day, but I have just completed my response for this weeks Writing Prompt! Apparently I needed to take it to a darker place? I was going to write another Borderlands fanfic, but then I decided that I could go ahead and put out a little bit of original work. So, it may still be inspired a bit by Handsome Jack? But, oh well!

The prompt was to use the following sentence: I told you that I was no good for you.


No Good For You

“I told you that I was no good for you.” They should be words of comfort, but they come out of cold lips. I can feel apathy marching across my body and settling into my center, like some kind of shield against what I’ve done.

Of course, I’ve done this so many times now that I know I don’t feel guilty about it – I don’t even know if I know how to feel guilty anymore.

Still, they’re laying there on the ground and they’re choking on a sob that’s gurgling blood. I think if they could have formed words around the gaping wound that was quickly spilling their life onto the ground around us, my great canvass, they would have asked me why.

Why did I do this – why did I get them close, just to slit their throat. Why did I make them think that I cared, when in all reality, I hadn’t truly cared about another person or thing in a long, long while.

And I wouldn’t have had a clear answer for them – at least, nothing that would have pleased them. I would have told them the universal cop-out of because.

Maybe I could have added on a little more.

Because I wanted to.

Because it makes me feel good.

Because you are nothing to me.

Whatever the because is, it won’t bring them satisfaction. And whatever question they might have had dies on their lips as the light flickers out of their eyes and the blood spilling from their throat edges forward and threatens to stain my boots.

I step out of the way before it can, and feel a slow smile curl across my lips. “I gave you fair warning.” I speak calmly to the body – and I had. They’d approached me and wanted more of whatever I had locked inside. They’d wanted to see the real me…

And I was only too happy to oblige.


So, there we go. I actually really enjoy writing from the perspective of evil characters, killers, etc. Especially on these little prompts – it helps me to have more realistic characters when it comes to writing novel villains… because the one thing that you have to remember is that they have a mind of their own, an agenda of their own, and in their head… they usually aren’t wrong. You have to remember to take the time and think of why your bad guy things that what they’re doing is right. 

Until then, here are the other people have done this writing prompt! You better go check them out!

Other Responses:

WriterNotWriter | Kayla Dore | ProwlingThunder

Make sure to check out those replies! I love seeing how everyone can come up with something different from the same sentence! If you want to be featured on my blog, just do the reply and then link back to me!

I can’t wait to see what you guys come up with! Just remember to keep reading and writing, and keep being awesome!

Until next time, you guys! Keep reading and writing, and keep being amazing!
Author Amanda McCormick

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